Tried to live a life,
tried to love this pain,
tried to lose the memories,
of my teenage times.
Remembering your perfect smile,
I was a shape of shame.
But in my mind you was completely mine.
Now nobody knows me
and I feel so lonely,
I'm a dreamer strange.
My hands missing your dress,
and that starts the stress.
Can you feel my love?
I don't wanna die,
but if you don't look,
I'm close to see my time.
Come on and kiss my lips,
listen now my tips.
Come on baby please,
rule with me for this.
Can you feel my love?
I don't wanna die,
but if you don't look,
I'm close to see my time.
Come on precious now,
feel the air around.
Show me how to know
omit my broken core.
Come with me my love,
and close the stupid door.
Come and dance with me,
all over the floor.
No trataré de dar una explicación a eso, porque probablemente como pasa comúnmente cuando uno intenta escribir en una lengua que no aprendió desde pequeño, quizá tenga errores, y varios. Pero aprovecho el medio para que me ayude, quien pueda y quiera a corregirlos.
Come
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RokCK (RokCK)
Tried to live a life, tried to love this pain, tried to lose the memories, of my teenage times. Remembering your perfect smile, I was...
En este sitio comparto además anécdotas, consejos que pueden resultar útiles, y destellos literarios según mis ratos de creatividad e inspiración. Los publico con gusto porque redactar me resulta una vía sana de liberar mucha de la tensión que almacena mi mente por diversas causas.
~./rokck